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The Simple Life Chapter 35
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Note: Ready and waiting! The Simple Life Chapter 35

So it has come to my attention... What am I saying, I've known about this for awhile. That some people may be on fence on my choice of.... let's just call them, colorful words, and I wanna take a short moment to a dress that.

It's true I swear. It is also true that I'm a sailor. These things go hand in hand. Apparently it carries over to my writing and to be honest I am unashamed.  I try to keep it to a dull roar for censorship's sake, but in my opinion, editing it out/working around them overall doesn't feel genuine. For instance, I'm pretty sure there is only so mad you can get before you start letting F-bombs drop. If your not, good on you, but my characters are not cut from that stone. Save maybe Pinkie Pie.

But I'm curious to know how you guys feel about it. This journal came to existence because of a comparison to Snicketbar,  where it was said that I choose... well more vulgar language over his. Which despite I haven't finished his story (sorry Snicket, I'm tryin'!) I am inclined to agree from what I've read so far... actually, I think I may swear more than most of us that are in this little mlp/Sonic crossover cirlce.

Your input on the matter is important,  and I can say with finality that the swearing won't go away, it's a staple/ motiff and that's that... I will on the other hand make it less prevelant.

And while we are at it. As you all have read, I handle sex vary precariously in my story. The term I like to use is implicit. While not explicitly saying what they are doing, I heavily hint. I also am not afraid to make jokes with sex being at the center of it, IE: Twilight's getting picked on by her friends, or Spike’s/Flash's Porn mag conundrum.

Lastly... you know what I haven't done in a while? RANT! I need to do a rant. Ooh, I got one, and it's related to swears.


What really bugs me, like drives me up a wall... are pony swears.

I'm referring to the word 'Buck'. This is such a ridiculous work around that it not even funny. Every time I see it I just want to cringe. It's just so fake and  forced that it hurts. I believe this to be because when I see it. I think 'Oh, they MLP'd the F-word.' Then my immediate cognizant thought is 'ponies wouldn't say that.' Why does my brain do that I don't know. But then when they straight-up swear, I read it as a normal sentence.

But here is the kicker... we know Godd*mn well what you meant to say Motherf*cker. Don't play f*cking games. Don't thinking for one f*cking moment that you slipped that sh*t passed us. It's not f*c king cute. It's not f*cking editing. You meant to say the word F*CK! Just f*cking say it!

See you all knew what I said. That is literally the equivalent of pony swears. So please... friends don't let friends use pony swears.


Wow... I just read this over and it read like hot garbage... this is what I get for trying the new phone app and posting a journal with so little sleep... oh well, in the spirit of the journal post... fuck it.


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The wolf you fed.
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NOW this is the law of the jungle, as old and as true as the sky,
And the wolf that shall keep it may prosper, but the wolf that shall break it must die.

As the creeper that girdles the tree trunk, the law runneth forward and back;
For the strength of the pack is the wolf, and the strength of the wolf is the pack.


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InsaneSpyro Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Thanks for the favorite
O0dragon0O Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Student General Artist
Gojira012 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
Here's my latest story…
MountyTheBat Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hii there~!!
im going to make a 3D render for this pic…
and :iconbrodogz: told me to ask for ur permission so....??
can i?
Gunflame345 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014
What?!?! That’s totally epic!! Note or link me when you finish and I'll feature it!!! Can't wait to see it!
MountyTheBat Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha ok ^^ i will ;)
WildKnight215 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
Hm...what do you think would happen if a Jedi and a Sith somehow landed in Equestria at each other's throats in the middle of everything going on?
Gunflame345 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
They would probably continue to fight to the death. Then if the sith wins, he might report back to whoever and try to take over the planet, which would be pretty easy. If the Jedi one he would try to make piece with the natives and bring them into the fold of the Jedi council.

Best guess.
WildKnight215 Featured By Owner 7 hours ago
Oh, crazy idea for a possible StarWars film.

Assimilation of the Force

Taking place thousands of years after the original trilogy, a group called the Anti-Force, a cult of LEARNT Force-Wielders (who LEARNED how to use the Force), who believe that Force-Sensitives (able to use the Force from BIRTH) are impure and are hunting them down, along with those who sympathize them (i.e. Jedi and Sith). Foes must become allies (again i.e., Jedi and Sith) and ALL Force Sensitives must band together to defeat, or at the very least SURVIVE this new enemy.
Gunflame345 Featured By Owner 6 hours ago
Hmmm... that is quite interesting. I think you might need to work on the reasoning behind the force learned wielders attacking the force sensitive. As it stands, it's a hard pill to swallow. And how would you know who is force sensitive vs. those who had learned the force?
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