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Art drawn for my story. By the Fans! Of the Fans! For the Fans!
The Simple Life Epilogue 
Word Count: 6500+
Status: Done...finally done!
Percent complete: 100%
Notes: Fresh outta the oven! The Simple Life Epilogue




So first lest me say this, I strongly debating putting a mature warning on this epilouge. But the more I think about it, it follows my guidelines of what I deem implicit vs. explicit. But that's not the point of this article.

This epilogue will bring to close The Simple Life and soon thereafter I will begin something new. But I hope, and am I asking, please... this is the chapter... the one that I'm gonna need your comments. Sincere reviews, opinions, and dialogues regarding the story as a whole. Now that it's complete this is where I can gauge if I have grown as writer, and the only way to do that is reach out to the masses and ask them but one simple question 'How am I doing folks?

So if you've been a wallflower... a slient reader... one those that follows along simply for the ride... Please... Implore you! Speak your piece! For I yearn to hear what you think and better myself for it. 

Sincerely, 
Gunflame345

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The wolf you fed.
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NOW this is the law of the jungle, as old and as true as the sky,
And the wolf that shall keep it may prosper, but the wolf that shall break it must die.

As the creeper that girdles the tree trunk, the law runneth forward and back;
For the strength of the pack is the wolf, and the strength of the wolf is the pack.
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ChaosSonic2013 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015
er I posted a critique for the epilogue and there's been no response so i'm guessing you didn't like my review so sorry about that, i will delete my critique if you want:slump: 
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Gunflame345 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015
WHAT?! NO!! I LOVE IT! I have to approve it before it even gets shown! Look, I'm getting set for deployment so I'm trying to spend a little quality time with the wife. Your critique was in-depth and awesome! I will reply, but I wanna sit down and give you a solid reply. The amount of thought you gave I simply want to return. So please don't take it down! 
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ChaosSonic2013 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015
er sorry about that, i wasn't going to delete the critique so you don't need to worry about that, just worried you were offended by it. Anyway look forward to your reply and hope you get to have fun time before deployment :)
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Ghoti657 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Happy birthday!
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Gunflame345 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015
Long time no see. Thank you, what you been up too?
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Ghoti657 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 23, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Lots...

Last August my cousin moved to Germany, and I helped him move and used that as an excuse to see Poland too and practice my Polish. I am never riding trains through Poland again. Next time I will rent a car... Polish people hate Germans and some of them always thought I was German because I speak German so well that it affects my Polish.

I got to see MiGs though which you never see in Mrrrica

 Pic #3 MiG 21 at Museum Narodowe by bcollins39302  and overall it was pretty awesome.



Then later that month I started grad school at the University of Utah. The only reason I went there is because they gave me a full ride. I hate Utah...

Then I met an Aussie girl on dA in September and shit got serious. Then I applied to present at a linguistics conference in Newcastle Australia, got accepted, and published, and my university partially funded me to go and I visited her 

Lorne Coast by bcollins39302

And took some pretty cool photos 
St. Kilda Beaches Melbourne Australia by bcollins39302


Then she came over last month to visit the U.S. and we went on a roadtrip through Washington, Idaho, Utah, Nevada, and California. I pretty much showed her all the national parks. Oh.. and I crashed into a car in Oakland and thought I was gonna get shot lol. I backed up into it and my bumper made a small paint smear on his bumper. The guy I hit was trying to get me to follow him to an ATM so I could pay for the damages but I didn't trust him at all and basically gave him my insurance and then left. Other than that the roadtrip went nicely. 


I am moving to Australia next year probably... on a student VISA. I think I'll get a PhD there. Even if I can't get college-related job I'll be fine... I can swim really well and used to be a lifeguard and the minimum wage for lifeguards in Australia is 23$ an hour and I can commission in their military once I get permanent residency. 


How have your things been going?
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Gunflame345 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2015
Holy!!

That is a lot to take in?! I'm happy for you and this girl... but don't be afraid to slow it down. Sounds like your about leave the country for this girl. However, it does sound like you have plan, which is more than what most have. Heck the only thing I got going for me, is I got my warfare pin. Oh, and glad you made it out of Oakland okay!. It's funny, you should have let me know, we might have been able to meet up. But I guess that would have depended on how close to San Diego you got. Could have gave you a tour of the Fleet or taken you on the Midway.

Oh... and that lifeguard job... that sounds pretty cake!
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ChaosSonic2013 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2015
Happy Birthday Buddy :)
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Gunflame345 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015
Thanks bro! How ya been?
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ChaosSonic2013 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2015
i've been good, watching anime and playing new video games wbu
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